I really like how you actually bolded, underlined, and italicized the text, it benefits people from understanding the text and creates fun. You followed the redundancy principle nicely, and you use paragraphs to list and explain your thinking. Furthermore, you followed the coherence principle, because you stick to principles that related to Twine. It was a really great blog post. I wonder if you could add a picture that is more related picture in your blog post. Overall it’s a well-explained post, you clearly showed your thinking, great job!